Intro to Major Writing Assignment

My first Major Writing Assignment, in English 98, was a compare and contrast paper. I labeled it "In Between the Lines". In this paper I chose to compare modern day hip hop music to poetry. I chose to write about these two things because I love writing music and before I was actually infatuated with Hip-Hop music, I started liking poetry first. So it was real nice writing about these two things. The one thing that really showed in this first paper, and you can notice, is that it seemed like I was writing for or favored one side more. I did favor the music more and that was something that was most definently brought to my intentions. You will notice as you read this paper that I do give a clear view of the line, between Poetry and Music, but its also obvious that the paper is one sided. If I could fix anything next time, it would be that I take more appreciation for both articles that I chose.